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Kayla dragged me into an opticians shop against my will.

“… I don’t care! You are taking an eye test. For Christ’s sake Jill, you thought that dog was bright orange!!!”

I stumbled gazing at the numerous shelves of glass frames. “It… It was the sun! It’s because the light was that bright!” I stammered.

Kayla shook her head and pursed her plump lips in disapproval. “Jill, it was raining.”
Her voice had taken on a hard edge and her words sounded a little flat. In her case, this meant that I would be getting that eye test even if she had to drag me in there by my leg, kicking and flailing about like a pig in for slaughtering.
Still, I slowed down a little and toyed with that idea for a while.

I guessed the optician noticed my demented look and the fact that I was searching for escape exits while waiting for his examination. He treated me with deliberate patience and care, as if I was a five year old child. I would have not been surprised if he gave me a lollipop when he finished.

Instead, he put on a blank face and quietly uttered:
“Miss Holland, you’re going blind.”
©2009 ~kibirkstele
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Author's Comments

Word count: 204

I blame jet lag of sorts and the fact that I do need to get an eye test for this one.

And I know, I suck, it's just I really haven't had much time and energy left over to go plotting things to write properly, but I will, hopefully from tomorrow on.

I'll probably write some cynical thriller to make everyone happy with a brave heroine and a hot guy or two so literally EVERYONE would be happy. :D

Anyhow, crit is welcome, as usual if you find anything worth critiquing there.

For *Flash-Fic-Month by the way

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:iconlotrtkdchic:
oh shiiiiiiiiiit D:

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That's because Pigfarts....is on MARS!!!!
:iconobsidian-eyes:
aw what a sad story, it very nicely led up to the climax tho ^^

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Kizuite yo, furimuite yo, dakishimete yo.
:icondarkenedobsession:
Oh nooooooo! Bliiiiiiiindnesssssssssss!

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What is it that draws you pathetic forms to live this life in false reality?
:icongwarins-knight:
Awh crap, not seeing stuff sucks! I'd definitely want the lollipop after something like that ._.

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Sarcasm, eeeeehhh? I think I've heard of that before...
Kick depression in the teeth! Hot damn! :evillaugh:
Avatar by Saix! =BlackDragonsChasm
:iconkibirkstele:
Shit indeed, imagine a blind photographer... XD

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Life is lies, so the honest play with the dead.

I WRITE with a pen, TYPING with a keyboard comes latter.


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