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OMG, Tony is such a flirt! He can be serious too though, i will prove it soon, if i find him that is... 
Just out of curiosity, who votes for Tony coming back?
And one other thing, Red, if you end up reading this you are not to tell anyone in school about the existance of such creation.. Because if you do, you are a dead man Styphen! And i'm waaaaay worse than Ms. O'Sullivan, especialy if you can feel pain, unlike my old ninja editor...
Hence, the new editor:
If you randomly stumbled upon this piece it is a third chapter of my novel "Between the Lines".
Chapter One: [link]
Chapter Two: [link]
***EDIT: That is as much as I can sencor it without taking out the important clues. I'm finally happy with it though.
And Tali, Don't freak.
Just out of curiosity, who votes for Tony coming back?
And one other thing, Red, if you end up reading this you are not to tell anyone in school about the existance of such creation..
Because if you do, you are a dead man Styphen! And i'm waaaaay worse than Ms. O'Sullivan, especialy if you can feel pain, unlike my old ninja editor...Hence, the new editor:
If you randomly stumbled upon this piece it is a third chapter of my novel "Between the Lines".
Chapter One: [link]
Chapter Two: [link]
***EDIT: That is as much as I can sencor it without taking out the important clues.
I'm finally happy with it though.And Tali, Don't freak.
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This is gooood
Seriously. You describe very well
The dialogue between the Tony and Izzy occasionally seems a little forced, but I don't know how I'd fix that... Tony especially seems to not use abbreviations, is there a reason for that? Cause if not, it just makes it seem a little clunky...
Other than that, great work
Seriously. You describe very well
The dialogue between the Tony and Izzy occasionally seems a little forced, but I don't know how I'd fix that... Tony especially seems to not use abbreviations, is there a reason for that? Cause if not, it just makes it seem a little clunky...
Other than that, great work